One comment on “Bloomsbury Publishing chooses October and November winner!

  1. I enjoyed the story, in particular the ‘Oompa Loompa’ reference. The critical point, injured -> criminal, I found a bit clunky, as I didn’t realise that he was a crim until he was in the Mercedes. Maybe that is just me. All in all though, I enjoyed it.

    Cheers,

    S. Noir

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